Wednesday, March 1, 2017

Review: City Love by John Deveaux

Title: City Love
Author: John Deveaux

Read copy: eBook (Kindle)
Published: February 22, 2017
Publisher: John Deveaux

When Jennifer Kingsley agrees to be the lie girlfriend of her best friend Adrian Lawrence, she's been waiting for two weeks to pass quickly.
But when Adrian's brother enters the equation, Jennifer sees all her self-control disappear. Pierre is nothing like his sweet brother at first. He is demanding and stern. He gets what he wants, and when he decides he wants Jenny, things are not as easy as they seem.
Will it be if Jennifer will indulge in her seduction techniques or will she leave unharmed these two weeks?

My rating:

I'd expect someone who writes a book to use a spell- and grammar-checker, and read it trhough multiple times and proofread (or have a professional do it) before even thinking of (self) publishing

As it is, this "book" is overflowing with errors (double punctuation, erroneous use of personal pronouns, incorrect word order etc.) that made it impossible for me to read beyond the first few paragraphs of the first chapter.

Not everybody's a writer, and not everybody who writes something should have it published...At least not with this kind of grammatical butchering.


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